My words are:
Bitter ~ watch ~ wild ~ stand ~ chat
They were submitted by: http://batteredhope.blogspot.com
**Thank you for such inspiring words!!**
I don't know if it makes me a bitter person, but my mind goes wild with jealousy, when I have to stand and watch you chat with other women.
I hate to stand by and watch you chat with other women.
It drives my mind wild with hurt and jealousy.
I guess you could call me bitter.
Maybe I am.
I cannot help it.
Not that long ago, it was me that held your attention.
I was the object of your affection.
I miss that.
I miss you.
I miss us.
Thank you for taking the time to read this! I hope you have a fabulous weekend!
Links to the other “Use Your Words” posts:
http://www.BakingInATornado.com Baking In A Tornado
http://stacysewsandschools.blogspot.com/ Stacy Sews and Schools
http://spatulasonparade.blogspot.com/ Spatulas on Parade
http://thethreegerbers.blogspot.ch/ Confessions of a part-time working mom
http://www.JuiceboxConfession.com Juicebox Confession
http://www.someoneelsesgenius.com Someone Else’s Genius
http://themomisodes.com The Momisodes
http://batteredhope.blogspot.com Battered Hope
http://eileensperpetuallybusy.blogspot.com/ Eileen’s Perpetually Busy
http://www.eviljoyspeaks.wordpress.com Evil Joy Speaks
Wow! Inspiring and intense words used so well by you. I am impressed that take one had every word contained in one sentence!ReplyDelete
Thank you! <3 The first thing that came to mind was that one sentence. I wanted to try to expand on it, so Take 2 came about. I still feel like I could/should do more. I feel and edit coming on.Delete
I can feel the pain in your words, especially take 2 which felt so poetic. I think you need to turn this into a full story.ReplyDelete
Thank you. I would love to expand on it. I feel like there is more there, but it is just below the surface. Definitely a possible edit in the future!Delete
It's an art to tell a story in very few words. You master it!ReplyDelete
PS: I hope it's fiction?
Thank you very much. That compliment means a lot to me. It is fiction based loosely on experience. I am really not a jealous person by nature. I definitely did get the inspiration from real life though.Delete
Wow, using all the words in one sentence! Take 2 was great, though.ReplyDelete
Take 1 came to mind instantly. Take 2 took some thought. Thank you so much!Delete
Right in the feels, lady!ReplyDelete
Hugs your feels! :)Delete
Absolutely loved the way you used the words - both ways. Thank you! It wasn't what I had in mind so better YET! :)ReplyDelete
I am so grateful you approve!!! Thank you so so much!!! The words brought my brain to life instantly!!! Great words!!! <3Delete
Oh Jules this is powerful. Definitely would like to see you expand on this.ReplyDelete