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Use Your Words January 2015

Today’s post is a writing challenge. This is how it works: participating bloggers picked 4 – 6 words or short phrases for someone else to craft into a post. All words must be used at least once and all the posts will be unique as each writer has received their own set of words. That’s the challenge, here’s a fun twist; no one who’s participating knows who got their words and in what direction the writer will take them. Until now.




My words are:
Bitter ~ watch ~ wild ~ stand ~ chat               
They were submitted by: http://batteredhope.blogspot.com      
**Thank you for such inspiring words!!**


Take 1:

I don't know if it makes me a bitter person, but my mind goes wild with jealousy, when I have to stand and watch you chat with other women.


Take 2:

I hate to stand by and watch you chat with other women.
It drives my mind wild with hurt and jealousy.
I guess you could call me bitter.
Maybe I am.
I cannot help it.
Not that long ago, it was me that held your attention.
I was the object of your affection.
I miss that. 
I miss you. 
I miss us.



Thank you for taking the time to read this! I hope you have a fabulous weekend!


Links to the other “Use Your Words” posts:

http://www.BakingInATornado.com                                                           Baking In A Tornado
http://stacysewsandschools.blogspot.com/                                          Stacy Sews and Schools
http://spatulasonparade.blogspot.com/                                                      Spatulas on Parade
http://thethreegerbers.blogspot.ch/                         Confessions of a part-time working mom
http://www.JuiceboxConfession.com                                                          Juicebox Confession
http://www.someoneelsesgenius.com                                                    Someone Else’s Genius
http://themomisodes.com                                                                                 The Momisodes
http://batteredhope.blogspot.com                                                                      Battered Hope
http://eileensperpetuallybusy.blogspot.com/                                      Eileen’s Perpetually Busy
 http://www.eviljoyspeaks.wordpress.com                                                          Evil Joy Speaks

Comments

  1. Wow! Inspiring and intense words used so well by you. I am impressed that take one had every word contained in one sentence!

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    1. Thank you! <3 The first thing that came to mind was that one sentence. I wanted to try to expand on it, so Take 2 came about. I still feel like I could/should do more. I feel and edit coming on.

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  2. I can feel the pain in your words, especially take 2 which felt so poetic. I think you need to turn this into a full story.

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    1. Thank you. I would love to expand on it. I feel like there is more there, but it is just below the surface. Definitely a possible edit in the future!

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  3. It's an art to tell a story in very few words. You master it!
    PS: I hope it's fiction?

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    1. Thank you very much. That compliment means a lot to me. It is fiction based loosely on experience. I am really not a jealous person by nature. I definitely did get the inspiration from real life though.

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  4. Wow, using all the words in one sentence! Take 2 was great, though.

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    1. Take 1 came to mind instantly. Take 2 took some thought. Thank you so much!

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  5. Absolutely loved the way you used the words - both ways. Thank you! It wasn't what I had in mind so better YET! :)

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    1. I am so grateful you approve!!! Thank you so so much!!! The words brought my brain to life instantly!!! Great words!!! <3

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  6. Oh Jules this is powerful. Definitely would like to see you expand on this.

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